S A V I OR

This a rough draft of a page in a comic I might do...someday.... (If not a comic, then fanfic)
Well, despite the craptastic coloring job, I'm still sure I won't be using all that much color, but I know I'm doing something with that white space around Al's crazy eyes...

And I'm also really proud of that 3rd panel were Al's smiling crazily. Funny how this page just started out with me wanting to practice crazy eyes.

The gist of the plot for this thing- Alfred's lost it, he's become convinced everyone needs "freed", he thinks as the hero it's his job to "save" them. Please note the quotation marks.

When he says, "Live free or die with the others," and then shoots Iggy...well... In his mind, they do live- just not "imprisoned" in this world.... To die, in his delusional mind, is to be killed without his blessing or his "good intent". (God complex?)

Ivan is the only one not scared shitless to try to do something. But...he becomes intrigued by this new Alfred, and slowly he stops giving a damn about the rest of the world. Ivan is incredibly amused and fascinated by Alfred now, and makes it his mission to find out everything about this new Al. More stuff will happen...and yeah... *has not thought any further ahead than this*

Yes...and as I am a n00b at coloring and digital art in general (still new to my tablet!) I would love suggestions on how to not make crappy coloring choices and such. First question: What to do about that pesky white space?

* I feel I should ask first, anyone interested in reading this at all?

(Sorry for the essay!)